Editing Tips: Reloaded

In February 2015, I completed the first draft of the first part of my next novel;  Gabriel’s Game

This story is in two parts, written as two novella’s.

Book 1: The White Queen
Book 2: The Black Knight

I’m working on book 2 at the moment, with book 1 due out in July 2015.

At the time, I published a blog on the editing process. Well, I've revamped it and the updated version is now on my shiny new blog:

Go to Amy's Shiny New Blog

I've now just completed the first draft of my first non-fiction book:

Operation Author: So You’ve Published a Book… Now What?

This is the first in a series of non-fiction guides for writers ‘Operation Author’, inspired by the content from this blog.

This blog post is proving invaluable as I plough through the tedious editing process. Hope you find it useful too.

The Editing Process: 4 Top Tips

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This week, I finished the first draft of part 1 of my third book, Gabriel's Game.

This story is in two parts, written as two novella's.

Book 1: The White Queen

Book 2: The Black Knight


I saw an interesting reference recently that sums up the drafting process:

The first draft is filling the bucket with sand, you only have a sandcastle when you've tipped it out and molded it.

Getting your story out of your head and onto the page is just the start. Next comes the lengthy and sometimes traumatic editing process.

For me, there are four key stages in the process of going from first draft to something publishable. I've plotted them out on a flow diagram below:

1) 1st Draft and 2nd Draft. On the image, I show a double headed arrow because I edit as I go. I'm not one of those writers who writes without making corrections as they go along, I've tried it, it doesn't work for me, I get distracted by obvious typos and spelling mistakes.  

2) Word-Loss-Edit. At this stage, I go through and tighten the narrative. Here are a couple of helpful links that I've used when going through this stage:

I found this link on Pinterst. In it Justin McLachlan has a list of six things to look out for in your writing:http://www.justinmclachlan.com/804/common-writing-mistakes/

I also found this link on Pinterest but I dip regularly into Litreactor.com. This article suggests eight words to seek and destroy and often they are words that, once removed, take several other unnecessary words with them: http://litreactor.com/columns/8-words-to-seek-and-destroy-in-your-writing

I have a copy of The Word Loss Diet  to keep handy as I edit Gabriel's Game: Part 1, The White Queen.



 These are the words I 'find' in my manuscript and delete or replace them:

• That
• Really
• Very
• Suddenly
• Words that end 'ly' (blitz those pesky adverbs)
• Then
• Is, am, was, were (use powerful verbs and fewer words instead)
• Started
• Like
• Smile (make each 'smile' count)

 
3)  Testing Cycle. At this stage I test my writing on a pool of eager Beta Readers. These are people I know who have enjoyed my books and frequently ask me when the next one is out. People who's views I trust, who are also avid readers and often grammar geeks. In this cycle various reads and re-reads take place and I filter the feedback and complete any appropriate re-writes

4) Fourth Draft. At this point I am confident that the book is ready to be seen by professionals. I'll work with editors to proof read and look at structural edits and complete final checks and edits

In his fantastic book On Writing, Stephen King recommends cutting your word count by 10%, even when you think you've finished.

Here are my Top 4 Editing Tips:

1) Less is more when it comes to word count. The skill of a good writer is to say a lot with very few words, never use three words when one will do. Tighten your writing by keeping it active and punchy.

2) Look for useful tips and content online. A crucial part of developing your craft as a writer is to identify the common mistakes you make and find ways to rectify them. I collect useful links for future reference using Pinterest

3) Take your time but don't aim for perfection. No one writes a perfect first draft, even the professionals who've been doing it for years. Take your time to produce a good quality book before you publish it. I made the mistake of rushing my first book, The Bronze Box and getting some bad reviews. I sought professional help with my second book, Solomon's Secrets and it made all the difference.

 

That said, it will never be perfect, because perfection is a fallacy.  Yes, you'll look back on it in years to come as your craft improves and cringe at your early work. It's OK, we all do it, but don't let that put you off.

There will always be work out there that's worse than yours and there will always be stuff that's better.

All you can do, is create something that's good enough at that point in your life and the only way you'll ever get feedback so you can learn, grow, develop and improve as a writer is to get the independent feedback of real readers who's lives you've touched, even in a small way, by sharing your vision with them.



4) Take Action

• Start a Pinterest board for writing

Here's mine:

Follow Amy Morse's board Writing on Pinterest.

• Follow related boards for new and useful Pins

• Add a Pin It button to your toolbar and Pin useful content.

Open doors, boxes, libraries and avoiding the road to hell

'The road to hell is paved with adverbs'

Stephen King

My first action this week for

Operation Author: 365 Actions to Becoming  A Successful Author

Is that I am re-reading 'On Writing' Stephen King's memoir of the craft. It's one of those books that every writer should read, at least once and preferably several times at different points in their careers. It grounds you and forces you to reflect on your writing practice.

It is also a useful book to be reading while you are in that all important copy editing stage of your latest work.

My second action this week has been to go through the latest proof of Solomon's Secrets and do my final re-writes, based on the feedback from the editorial report. 


My third action has been starting to formulate my plans for my launch event. I've decided on the ideal date, I now have to find a venue. I put a few enquiries out this week, so far without success but I have some more places in mind. 

I also got a bit carried away in the SS Great Britain gift shop and bought 3 miniature versions of the box I bought in Bulgaria. The plan is to put some keys in these and leave them in 3 locations that participants must follow clues to find.

I went to a couple of Bristol Doors Open day events at the weekend.

The coolest was doing the behind the scenes tour of the Brunel Institute at the SS Great Britain.This action, my fourth action, was the most fascinating to me.

I had no idea they did such amazing work there. They have a library of antique books and a team of specialists who curate, maintain and restore old texts and artefacts with a maritime, engineering or Brunel link. And, the best part, as long as you book in, it's open to the public.

This will be a great source of inspiration and research for my next book, with a working title of Gabriel's Game. 

In this book, one of the key characters is a rare book collector and the search for the manuscript continues.

I shall definitely go back for inspiration and to chat to some of the experts. I also requested a copy of a leaflet the Leather Conservation booklet on Caring for Books and Archives. One of the team at the institute emailed a copy to me.
Awesome!

My fifth action and the one I'm most pleased with this week, was my interview on Bristol urban radio station, Ujima.

Here it is, have a listen;

http://listen-again.ujimaradio.com/index.php?id=18635

I start talking 6:40 in.

Action number six was attending a writing critique group this week. We meet once a month in the King William pub and give each other feedback on work that we email out a few days before. I emailed out my short story 'Interview with an agent' that you can read in a July entry on this blog. It went down well and the other writers in the group liked the idea of interviewing a main character like this. But they all agreed that I could have gone further, and dug deeper into Tom Sheridan's psyche. I'll do some re-writes once I've finished with the final draft of Solomon's Secrets and re-post it here.

My seventh and final action this week is later today. I am going to a self publishing event at Foyles in Bristol, so I'll report back on that another time.
 

Excitement, nerves and budget decisions...

I've had a fairly quiet week on the becoming an author front, after my 25 minutes of Wiveliscombe fame last week!

This week for 

Operation Author: 365 Actions to Becoming  A Successful Author

My seven actions have been baby steps and bits and bobs:

Action 1:
I've been making enquiries with several copy editors.

I spoke to Silverwood Books, who I had wanted to publish with but I don't have enough budget to pay for their full editing service, I'm hoping they could still help me in other ways through and I'm trying to arrange a meeting with them.

I met another writer who does copy editing and although I will probably choose someone else, as she specialises in non- fiction, I did make a good connection with another Bristol writer there and will stay in touch with Leah.

I also exchanged lots of emails with a friend of a friend who does copy editing, but again, her specialty is non-fiction. 

I think I might use my friend and fellow writer Jo Reed. She always gives me really useful and constructive critiques at our regular Southville Writers meet up. I'm slightly hesitant though as I'd rather use someone I don't know and I'm also aware that my genre isn't really the kind of thing Jo is interested in.

 
Action 2: 
In the end, I have decided to get a copy edit of the first 10,000 words and a publishing report from Arc Editorial & Literary Consultancy in Bristol - They've been recommended by several people. 

I sent that off this week and expect to hear back in a couple of weeks. Both excited and nervous about it!
 
Action 3:
A former colleague and fan of my books offered to do a proof read of Solomon's Secrets. I sent the book to her and got it back within a few days. She loved it and did it really quickly. Thanks Marion!

I'm now working through it doing another proof read. Most of the mistakes she noted had already been spotted but there were still some that had been missed. The book has now been proof read by five people, and it just goes to show that however good you think it is, someone will always spot something that others have missed. 

My advice to other writers, get at least 5 other people to proof read your work before contemplating publication. This was a lesson I learned the hard way when I had some bad reviews of my first book The Bronze Box. I have since been through it again and done a second edition.

Action 4:
I ordered a batch of the second edition of The Bronze Box, ready to send out to all those that pledged for it as a reward on the crowdfund.

Action 5:
I published an update on the crowdfund to let everyone know what progress I'm making and what I'm spending the fund on.

Action 6:
I have been away this weekend, visiting my sister in Cornwall. I took lots of postcards and mini manuscripts with me and have distributed a few around while we were out and about.

I could have kicked myself though; we spent the day in Plymouth and I left them at the house. 

My lovely sister, who is an artist and does some great work, is going to continue to do some guerrilla marketing for me. I left some mini manuscripts and postcards with her. 

Her business is Woolly Soup and she makes some really cool and quirky things that she sells in galleries across Cornwall.

Action 7:
I've been trying to hold off from getting too involved in writing the next book; Gabriel's Game, but it's swirling around in my head. 

I've been adding to my Pinterest board for Gabriel's Game with research links. 

As you can see from this screen grab, both Tom Sheridan and Sasha Blake are still my central characters but there will be themes around secret societies and ancient libraries

 
I haven't been able to resist doing some writing this week. 

As I'm sure many writers do, I often write in a note book and type up the ideas later. At that stage I can add details and do some editing. I tend to write in pencil, I find I can write more neatly and quickly. Here's a really raw conversation between Tom and Sasha that will be written into the new book:

I've been writing up a few snapshots and scenes. I'm planning to really knuckle down with the next book later in the year by doing NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) again.

On this wet bank holiday Monday, I'm sat in my PJ's with a mug of hot coffee and some 80's-tastic music playing. Seems like a perfect day to get on with some more writing...