Sunday, 21 December 2014

Countdown to the Finish Line

This week for my


Operation Author: 
365 Actions to Becoming a Successful Author


...project I have dedicated much of my time to writing. The couple of actions I've completed were:





First Action: 

Scheduled plenty of tweets up to the New Year so I don't have to think about it over the Christmas break.

Follow me here:

https://twitter.com/TomCatDesigns






Second Action: 

I have plenty of stock of The Bronze Box and Solomon's Secrets at home and posted images on Facebook for anyone looking for last minute present ideas.


Third Action:

I've done some more dodgy artwork. 

I get quite a few followers on Pinterest, especially my 'Writing' board.

As an experiment, I've doodled an image for Pinterest to encourage people to connect with me on Facebook too.





Amy on Pinterest
 Here I am on Pinterest: http://www.pinterest.com/amymorse184/

Speaking of Facebook, my Fourth Action was to schedule some regular tweets to try to reach 100 likes on my Facebook author page. 

I've picked up a few, but if you'd like to keep up to date with my adventures in writing, come over and say hello to me on Facebook here: https://www.facebook.com/AmyCFitzjohn




We're down to the last 10 days of the year and the end of this project. I'm cheating slightly, this is what I'm going to do next and I'll update you again in January with my progress.

Here's my plan for a 10 day countdown to 2015


Ten

Plan my 10 remaining actions (Check!)

Nine

Complete the chapter I am working on for Gabriel's Game

Eight

Put together some content for my next 365 project

Seven

I have 6 more chapters to complete for Gabriel's game. Finish one of them

Six

It's Christmas Day! I've some business and writing books on my present list - Let's hope I get some of them.

I'll fit in some writing if I can, but I suspect I'll be eating and drinking and being merry

Five

I'm hosting family but should be able to fit in some writing at the end of the day after they leave. Finish a chapter

Four

I'm hosting more family but have a plan for a treasure hunt to entertain my niece and nephew which involves some creative clue writing - I'll make my last minute preparations before they arrive

Three

Finish the last of the chapters

Two

It's my birthday! I'm going to London but one thing I want to do is visit the British Museum and I'll be using it as an opportunity to do some research ready for my re-writes

One

Do some last tweaks, structural changes and write any extra passages needed to connect the first draft up

Zero

Happy New Year! Now my next 365 Project starts and so do the re-writes and edits.

(Is it weird that as I wrote this countdown I had the theme to Thunderbirds in my head?)


 
And here's a final dodgy doodle for you:







Sunday, 14 December 2014

Pulling faces in the mirror and other writers habits...

This week for 

Operation Author: 365 Actions to Becoming a Successful Author

I've not quite built up to seven actions and with Christmas approaching, my time is going to be more and more diverted. I plan to continue this 365 project into January before starting a new one.

My first action has been to think about what 365 project I might do in 2015. I put a question on my Project Book 365 Facebook page:




What do you think I should do?


Vote here:  https://www.facebook.com/ProjectBook365


My second action was to create some 'writers problems posters'

 























 






















My third action had been to schedule in lots of social media updates on Twitter and Facebook using these posters and other content, follow me there. I've also been pinning them on Pinterest, find me there too.

My fourth action was to map out 'Gabriel's Game, part 1: The White Queen' - Here's how I plan my books:

 I start with a blank sheet and mark the first chapter and the last chapter







The blue post its are character groups and a key 
The yellow post its are the scenes







I have 1 post it per scene and plot them out






Finally, I've marked the scenes I've written with orange.




As I write I can rearrange the scenes and connect them together. I may add, merge or remove scenes and I can then swap the post its around until everything fits neatly together







My fifth action had been to make writing related Xmas presents. I don't want to say what they are until after Xmas in case of spoilers.

My final actions have been writing. I have set myself a target to complete the first draft of
'Gabriel's Game, part 1: The White Queen' by the end of the year.



Arr - I've just seen a You Tube video of a Dr Who feature called 'Gabriel's Game' - I might have to rethink the title of the book...












 

Saturday, 6 December 2014

Parties and Books...What else is there?

This update for

Operation Author: 365 Actions to Becoming a Successful Author

covers two weeks.

Last week I had an intensive period of writing to make up some lost time on NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) and the two big things were my launch events. 

Here are some of the images from the celebration for Solomon's Secrets:




Every party must have bunting!


Goody bags and cutting the cake. It was awesome chocolate cake!
Myself and some friends. Left to right: My amazing husband Graham, me, Becky, Andy, Alice and Linzi

These pictures were from earlier in the evening, before the shots started to come out.


The second launch was decidedly less raucous. It was at Small Bar on King Street.

The books in their box

This week my seven actions have been:

1) I also completed NaNoWriMo


2) I have continued to write and I'd like to have the first draft of Gabriel's Game: Part 1, The White Queen, written by the end of the year.

3) I changed the price of the eBooks for The Bronze Box and Solomon's Secrets and started an offer on Black Friday. 

I'm going to to leave the two books at the lower price for the rest of the year.

Both are now available for $2.99 or £1.97

 

4) I've had my first review on Solomon's Secrets - 5 stars, a short but great review and what it now means is that the book is starting to come up organically on Amazon so I hope more people find it.

Thank you Judith Canterbury for taking the time to write it.


 5) My next action is to put an appeal out...

If you've read, or are in the process of reading Solomon's Secrets, please help me out by sparing a few minutes to write a review on Amazon.

If you email or tweet me with your Facebook/Twitter links I'll thank you publicly and follow you

Twitter: @TomCatDesigns

amy@tomcatdesigns.co.uk

(If you would like a free copy of the eBook in exchange for a review, also email me.)



6) My sixth action is to do some research to find out if there are other ways I can get some reviews for the book. I'll let you know how it goes.

7) I listed Solomon's Secrets on BookBzz



Have you found any good book listings sites?

Have you found a good way to get reviews?

Share your experiences here and help out other writers.


 

Sunday, 23 November 2014

Magic Dust and Bending the Rules...


This week for

Operation Author: 365 Actions to Becoming a Successful Author

I am still plugging away at NaNoWriMo - I must confess, I am falling behind but have some clear space to catch up on writing in the next week.

I'm still doing some marketing activities:

Action 1: I went to a Global Entrepreneurship Week event hosted by Bristol Woman. I was one of the speakers but I enjoyed hearing other inspirational women sharing their stories and advice.

Action 2: I have 2 launch events coming up in the next week and have been putting together bits and pieces and scheduling updates on Social Media.

Action 3: I have been using all my ink up printing off booklets for my guests featuring short stories about my main characters, Tom Sheridan and Sasha Blake. I also have plans to add to this booklet and publish it as an eBook, so watch this space for updates

Action 4: I put some feelers out, inviting writers to share 200 words from their NaNoWriMo's. I've not had much luck, aside from lots of retweets, but it only seems fair that if I'm asking other writers to share I need to lead by example.

Here are 200 (well, 193, but close enough) words from my current project. It's raw, but I hope you like it:


 
 As I've scrimped on the actions this week, here's a feature instead to inform and inspire



* * *



Some books are more magical than others



Like all writers, I am an avid reader.

I am also a slow reader, relishing in every word. As a consequence, reading takes a lot of time and energy from me, I don't do nearly as much as I'd like to.

I am also very impatient. All the advice tells us that writers should read things they don't like so that they can learn from the experience, but my reading time is precious and try as I might, I just can't bring myself to spend that time reading something that I'm not enjoying.

Tweet: Flagellating myself with something I don't want to read is not my idea of fun

If a book doesn't hook me in within the first few pages I give up on it. There are charity shops all over Bristol with books in with only the first dozen pages thumbed.

I go through despondent periods where I just can't seem to find something that I enjoy reading.

My biggest disappointment recently was 'Bring up the Bodies' by Hilary Mantel.

I had been looking forward to getting to it on my to read pile and when I did my disappointment was so bitter it hurt. I couldn't even make it past the first chapter. I reviewed it on Goodreads.

In my review I make reference to common factors that can be off putting for readers - for example: jumping between points of view and shaky use of tenses.

When writers get together and critique each others work these are sorts of things we pull each other up on.

But have you ever noticed that with some books, those mechanical bits and bobs don't seem to matter? The book has a resonance, a magic about it.

So is it possible to break those rules of convention and still write a successful book?

My brain tells me no but my heart tells me yes and to illustrate the point I'm using the book I am currently reading as an example.

Captive Queen, by Alison Weir





This book has that magic spark and I can't explain it. There are 5 sins it commits, yet despite that, I'm still hooked:

Sin number 1: Jumping between points of view


I enjoy being in the head of different characters, in fact, in my own books, The Bronze Box and Solomon's Secrets, the whole story is woven together from fragments experienced by different characters. But in The Captive Queen, point of view changes happen between paragraphs, yet Alison Weir gets away with it.



Sin number 2: The dreaded adverb

Stephen King once said 'The road to hell is paved with adverbs'
Those sneaky little words that creep in with their 'ly's on the end.
The skill of a writer is to get across a sense of what characters are thinking or feeling through their conversations. But when there are long passages of narrative with very little conversation, you can get away with a few of these little blighters. 

Tweet: Adverbs are like seasoning, nobody likes tasting something that's too salty or peppery the seasoning should go unnoticed and just bring out the flavour.


Sin number 3: Conversation tags

Characters only ever 'said'. Said is a word that disappears into the text and reminds the reader who's talking. The words they say should indicate how they are feeling and what they are doing.

In Captive Queen, most conversations have examples of a tag other than 'said' - these are some that popped off the page:

'Henry went on'
'Bernard effused'
'Bernard pleaded'
'She chided'

Here's a couple that also include an adverb;

'Eleanor chided sweetly'
'Geoffrey replied sanguinely'
'Henry replied mulishly'
'Henry told her bluntly'

Despite the adverb being unnecessary in all examples, I still kept reading.

Sin Number 4: Awkward conversations between characters

There are several examples where Henry Fitzempress and Eleanor of Aquitaine are having sex and having conversations about their empires and quest for power...

Seriously? I don't know about the rest of you, but in my experience mouths are otherwise engaged during lovemaking and there is usually far too much grunting, sighing and appreciative humming to be making world changing decisions and having complicated political conversations!

Despite that, I still enjoyed the sensuous nature of these scenes, delivered with a such a light touch in the narrative.

Sin number 5: Looking in the mirror

Eleanor describes to the reader how she looks by admiring herself in the mirror.

The only reason this rather dodgy plot device works in this case is because we are reminded throughout the book of how vain and arrogant Eleanor is.




Conclusion
I'm halfway through this 481 page book and I'm yet to be put off. 

Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm going to curl up in an armchair with a mug of tea and keep reading...






Sunday, 16 November 2014

A Face for Radio

This week for

Operation Author: 365 Actions to Becoming a Successful Author

I am still working through Gabriel's Game for NaNoWriMo and dedicating any time I can spare towards that goal. I'm still doing some small acts of marketing, but November's priority is writing.

This week, I have been preparing things for my launch events for Solomon's Secrets, despite my diversion to NaNoWriMo, I've still managed a few of my weekly seven actions:


1) I'm having a celebration event next Saturday, which is invitation only, where I will be sending my guests of a treasure hunt / pub crawl around King Street in Bristol. I've been putting together the clues and making up goody bags.


2) I fluttered my eyelashes at the nice man in Timpson's at Asda Bedminster and acquired a big handful of old keys for the treasure hunt.

3) Anything left over from Saturday's event will get used at the Launch Event at Small Bar on Wednesday 26th.

This is an open event and I'll be talking about my book and selling signed copies.

If you are in Bristol that evening and want to come along the details are on Eventbrite:





My biggest news this week, and most exciting was that I was interviewed on BBC Radio Bristol on Friday.

I always said I had a face for radio...hopefully a voice for it too...

It is possible to listen to the interview for 7 days after it was on, so hurry if you'd like to hear it:


I was interviewed by Steve Yabsley on the lunchtime show.



Here's some notes from part of it, in case you see this after the recording is available;


Steve: Amy has come to tell us about her new book, her second book, called Solomon's Secrets, written under a different name, Amy C Fitzjohn. It's a mystery adventure, a bit Indiana Jones-ish. Let's find out about you. You were born in Swansea, any memories of Swansea?

Me: Not really, I was a wee nipper when we moved away. We moved to the East Midlands, my mum's family come from the Leicester area

Steve: Then you moved to the South West. Where did you live in Somerset?

Me: Wellington, I don't have many memories of the East Midlands, we moved as a family when I was about 10 or 11

Steve: What about eduction, did you go to university?

Me: I didn't, well, I did for a week but that's another story.

Steve: Did they not like you or did you not like them?

Me: Well...I couldn't possibly say.

Steve: What were you hoping to study?

Me: English and teaching. I always thought I'd quite fancy being a teacher, but when it came down to it I didn't want to work in a school. I ended up taking a year out and my dad, who's probably listening, got me a job at the VAT office. I did that for a while and discovered a world beyond education. 

Steve: These days you're a business trainer and entrepreneur and you have connections to Bulgaria. You lived there fore while, tell us about that?

Me: A few years ago my husband and I had a couple of properties which we sold and he was made redundant from his job. We'd always talked about living overseas.

Steve: What is it like as a country to deal with, is it safe?

Me: Yes, we got there when they'd just joined the EU, there is still corruption there but the solicitor we used was the most honest solicitor I've ever met, we also had some great agents there.

Steve: Were you selling property there?

Me: No, we bought an unfinished new build and did it up. We were thinking about starting a business but just wanted to experience living there.

Steve: What's wonderful over there is how the coast is quite well developed but you only have to go a few miles inland and it's like stepping back in time.

Me: It's amazing, our property is in an village called Nevsha with stunning scenery. Most people there are farmers and there are chickens and geese in the street. There are more horses and carts than cars.

Steve: :Let's talk about your passion for writing

Me: I started my first book as a teenager and got a lot of encouragement from my teachers. I finally finished that book, Running Free, while we were in Bulgaria. I'm now writing my fifth book. I had to write three pretty terrible books before I wrote something worth publishing.

Steve: Let's talk about your first book, published last year, The Bronze Box. Tell us about the characters, Sasha Blake and Tom Sheridan?

Me: They are the hero and heroine of all the books. Sasha is quite conflicted and a bit of a loner. Much of Solomon's Secrets is set in Bristol and she's working at Bristol University but in the first book she's a student, working on a dig site in Bulgaria. An artefact goes missing and she is recruited by a covert organisation, The Agency, years later to find it. Her mentor at the site is suspected of stealing it and she is determined to clear his name.

 

Steve: What about Tom Sheridan?

Me:  He is an Agent working for The Agency. Have you seen the movie, Monuments Men? Well I read the book and it inspired me to come up with an organisation that specialises in repatriating stolen antiquities.

We talked about the movie at this point - I'd have liked to have said more about Tom Sheridan, but there wasn't time. If you'd like to know more about Tom, read a short story about him, here:http://ideaism.blogspot.co.uk/2014/07/get-to-know-tom-sheridan-interview-with.html

Steve: Have you always had an interest in archaeology?

Me: I've always been interested in history and exploring. I travel quite a bit, especially around Europe, and I like to research the history of a place, spending time in museums and exploring.


Steve then described the books as:

Combining history and intrigue, travel guide and crime novel

I talked about my favourite writer, Paul Sussman, who influenced the genre I write in.

I then went on to talk about crowdfunding Solomon's Secrets and about the sales of my first book, The Bronze Box.

We discussed marketing and my mini manuscripts.

I've since updated the short stories about Tom and Sasha and will publish these versions another time